Small Group Choreography Part 2

My small group performed our choreography to our teachers in order to get some feedback for how to improve and develop our movement in further detail. Our piece is still about an article entitled 'Maryam's Story'. This is about how a young girl that experiences a bombing in her village so her family has to flee from their home to a safer place. She has to leave all of her possessions behind such as her special childhood toy; her doll. After we had shown our teachers our dance piece we received the feedback of needing to reduced the amount of throwing with the doll as well as thinking more about the intention of every movement; what does each movement represent. We then went away and thought about the comments that we had been given. After this, we rehearsed our choreography until we felt that it covered all of the feedback given to us.